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djdillyc
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Post by djdillyc » Thu Apr 02, 2020 8:38 pm

Hello,

I am working on a composition and I've hit a wall. Can someone listen to my piece (specifically measures 57 to the end)? I don't know if it flows. So, if you want context I would start from measure 52.

One thing I am stuck with is what chord should I add to measure 64 to fit with the cello part. It seems like no matter what chord I add it doesn't gell well.

Thanks! Also, any other feedback and advice on how to continue would be appreciated!


oldmkvi
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Post by oldmkvi » Sat Apr 04, 2020 5:40 pm

Meas 62/63/64 cadence out in A Major, sounds right to me!
That's II/V/I in A Major.

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