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Song Feedback Appreciated

Post by djdillyc » Sat Apr 11, 2020 4:35 pm

Hello,

I am writing a song for Soprano vocals, English Horn, Violin, Cello, and harp. I was wondering if I could get some feedback on the last section I am working on. Specifically from measures 68 till the end.

Thanks
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Post by Djard » Mon Jul 20, 2020 6:45 pm

Very pretty, with some nice chord change. I think it would be even better if the sections were more distinct, but perhaps I have been influenced too much by verse and chorus structure in modern music. Still, a longer pause in the lead voice would underline the fact that sometimes less is more. The lyrics could paint a clearer picture.

Just my two cents' worth.

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