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Thoughts on Waltz

Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2020 6:12 pm
by djdillyc
Hello,

I am writing a short 20 measure waltz and wanted to get anyone's feedback.
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Re: Thoughts on Waltz

Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2020 8:07 pm
by Peter Thomsen
No comments on the music; I suppose that what you have written, is what you want.

Comments on the layout:

1) Your barlines are quite thin.
I would make them thicker.
(Document Options - Barlines)

2) In meas. 6 - 7 I would begin the slur on the first tied note:

Re: Thoughts on Waltz

Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2020 9:34 pm
by djdillyc
Thanks! I change that right away! :D